Lacking melancholic feeling...
What I said above, and maybe the hat, in my opinion, is better if a little louder. Also, the bass is overpowering, so the other instruments are not totally heard. Anyways, it's still a good song. Maybe just reduce the levels of the bass.
yea, maybe, though wanted to have a heavy bass to promote a somewhat malancholic feeling, seems like I failed doing that though ;(... :D xD
Anyway thanks for the feedback, I definetly agree with you about "too much bass" but, I wasn't 100% whether that's what the song needed or not, which is one of the reasons why I'm posting it up here; to get this kind of feedback. And apparently i should remaster a lil of this song so that there's still a somewhat heavy bass but so that it doesn't overpower anything, probably gonna take some time xD
Thanks a ton!
-shoephly ^^
Nice for a first!
Kinda noisy at the other half, maybe proper compressing and equalizing on that part could've made it better. Anyways, really nice! My first wasn't like this! 9/10, 4/5!
Thanks very much! I didn't even master this at all, and I'm pretty happy how it turned out. It's a little generic but my friend and I were pretty much teaching ourselves how to use fl studio.
Seriously...
I agree with the comments below. 'Nuff said.
Eerie
Its empty feel gives the feeling of "thick rain" just fine. The samples are used well to give an eerie mood, though it becomes much more of an "escape from death", in my opinion. The scores are also nice, though in the ending part, you could have made it more dramatic. Again, it's my opinion. It lacks on giving impact, but I like this. 9/10, 4/5.
Fair comments, I'm glad the atmosphere of the song is getting some positivity.
Strangely relaxing
Really light melody, it gives the listener a warm feeling while being given the imagination of a computer user operating his computer.
Simply put, this is really great!
Really nice
Not much transition is changed from the original song, but this song is different enough to be called a remix. Too bad you can't submit the HQ version, it will really be amazing. 10/10, 5/5!
Awesome.
I love the synths and the "choir" on the slow part in the middle. The combination of the bass with the synths on most parts are also commendable. Compression and mixing are all well done! Your style is really something the world should notice.
Way too good
It kinda sounds like DDR's Seduction (if you know what that song is).
Anyways, really nice song. The compression is done very well, that it sounds so pleasant. The instruments are a major plus!
Relaxing
A really nice song. Though I think it won't fit a video game that much.
Also, is this composed on FL Studio? Some instruments seem familiar. :D
9/10, 4/5.
Not much of the oblivion thing..
It gives the "oblivion feel" alright, but not that much. Anyways, the mixing is done nicely, the chords and the notes are calm, which results into a nice sounding song. Though it gets repetitive and boring, it's a song I enjoy listening to.
Also, the ending is kinda lame. :D
9/10, 5/5!
Composer/Arranger
Philippines
Joined on 1/26/10
{sPhly} - Uneasy Tranquility